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Submarine quik test WIP by Vincent-Montreuil Submarine quik test WIP by Vincent-Montreuil


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:iconelemento11:
Well, maybe im not the exact guy to write a critique,
but by seen your work and you are requesting it,here it goes...

Execution is super well done, at first i saw kind
of spaceship with a solar sail or something...
proportions and sense of scale are there,coloring, depth highlites/shadows are there...great attention to detail...
By looking at the design for a few minutes and for more that i try to pícture it inside the water, i dont see that could actualy work, i believe the big plate on the front would create a lot of resistance to the water,making the sub slow, unless is maybe a Lab Sub or something like that,

Now,judging by your work i believe you like fast moving veichles
i think without that plate in the front it could work much better for a submarine and make a more agresive and functional design...
Just me.
Keep up The fantastic Work.
Elemento
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Slayer3915 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010
Wow, looks great.
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Vincent-Montreuil Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thx :)
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Bonvallet Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Ooooo I'm in love with the new panels. It'd be cool if they could collapse into the hull.
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Novastar2486 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
This design is much stronger in my opinion, well done.
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Vincent-Montreuil Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
So this is your favourite ? (in reference to the poll)
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Novastar2486 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
Indeed it is, it looks like you have now incorporated elements of both previous options into this one.
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Csav Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
Would it be possible to collaborate the two designs...use this as a base and in-corporate the middle central fin along the top of the sub, then the spinning blades would not fit/work sadly but this I think would really bring the design together nicely :)
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Vincent-Montreuil Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I have made some modifications in order to make ot more realistic.

Original comment at this page [link]

It's difficult to explain it briefly, but I have made some modifications to make the project more realistic. For sure, this project is a bit science fiction, but the blue version (older version) definitively doesn't works in my screenplay (the propeller that serves at the same time as a sailing). So you can notice that the main body is approximately the same. The changes are fisrt of all the sail (here a simple sail which as only one function), this two pillars in order that the submarine could alight on the ocean's bottom and the propeller in order to recover the energy of the ocean current.

So after some personal reflections and thanks to the comments and the poll, I will use this one as a base, keep all the technical parts and change the design (style). In order to make it more pure, more smoothly and with a "streamline" character (more like the first version).
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Csav Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2010
Yeah, now you mention about the propeller to recover energy I really like this idea, its gives functionality to the design. Maybe if the fin running along the top of the sub could have a break in it for the propeller to spin freely?

Regardless, I'm still a huge fan of your work, keep them coming! :)
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Csav Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2010
Very nice, but it has put a spanner in the works regarding the poll haha :)
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